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| Inspired by Lou Bega - Mambo No. 5 |
One, two, three, four, five,
everybody's in the bar, so let us write.
The air, hums, like it remembers a song.
not a loud one— but something soft,
half-sung by power lines
and the distant hush of tires on wet asphalt.
I move through it slowly,
as though
the street might dissolve beneath me,
the pavement is warm,
cracked in places where stories seep,
I am careless enough to try, as you can see.
[Chorus]
A little Bit-O-Honey bars for my pain,
a little bit of Charleston Chew explained,
a little bit of poetry is all I need,
a little bit of lyricism here and there.
A little bit of Milk duds in the rain,
a little bit of Red Hots, go insane,
a little bit of Twizzlers makes me sway,
a little bit of Snickers to end my day.
Windows blink with silent color.
A curtain stirs in a building I’ll never enter.
A bird crosses overhead,
its wings carve through the stillness,
men no longer serenade women
nor make them bloom like amaryllis.
The world feels paused,
not asleep,
just listening—
to the low music in the wires,
to the gentle weight of sky pressing against glass,
to the rustle of air remembering,
I wonder what it takes for a lullaby
to be woven from the hush of traffic.
[Chorus (slowed)]
A little Bit-O-Honey bars for my pain,
a little bit of Charleston Chew explained,
a little bit of poetry is all I need,
a little bit of lyricism here and there.
A little bit of Milk duds in the rain,
a little bit of Red Hots, go insane,
a little bit of Twizzlers makes me sway,
a little bit of Snickers to end my day.
Some days, the air tastes of iron and rain,
others, of fire and forgotten green.
Clouds drift like strangers overhead,
unaware of the hunger down here
and thirst for space.
I am restless, I drift, unseen, through alleys
and courtyards,
between the pavement and sky,
I exist like a breath held too long—
Hush now, world, in smoke and blue
the city sleeps and so must you,
just close your eyes
and think of something sweet,
skittles, dots, twix and sugar babies.
Five, six, seven, eight!
[Chorus (upbeat)]
A little Bit-O-Honey bars for my pain,
a little bit of Charleston Chew explained,
a little bit of poetry is all I need,
a little bit of lyricism here and there.
A little bit of Milk duds in the rain,
a little bit of Red Hots, go insane,
a little bit of Twizzlers makes me sway,
a little bit of Snickers to end my day.

I ADORE THIS! I am singing the chorus and jiving to it and SMILING! And the story between the chorus is so good.
ReplyDeleteThese lines
"The air, hums, like it remembers a song.
not a loud one— but something soft,
half-sung by power lines
and the distant hush of tires on wet asphalt. " are among my favorites.
And this one: "I exist like a breath held too long— " I can just FEEL this one.
LOVE this! And you even added some extra candies in at the end too!
Thank you so much, Lillian 😄 so glad you enjoyed it! ❤️
DeleteWhat a fun, rolicking good time I had reading this!!! I would love to hear you sing this for us. Maybe with banjo accompaniment. LOL
ReplyDeleteThank you so much, Helen 😘 It's a fun prompt! ❤️
DeleteOMG
ReplyDeleteWhat a fun poem
BRAVO!!!!!
Thanks for dropping by my blog this evening
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Thanks, Gillena! ❤️
DeleteGreat format and lyrics meant for a rainy day.
ReplyDeleteI am so glad you enjoyed it! 😊
DeleteA fun song-poem, Sanaa, that had me humming the chorus to the tune of Lou Bega’s - Mambo No. 5 (A Little Bit of...). I love the idea of air humming ‘like it remembers a song…half-sung by power lines and the distant hush of tires on wet asphalt’. I also love the idea of a lullaby ‘woven from the hush of traffic’ - just like the final stanza ending of your poem before the refrain!
ReplyDeleteThank you so much, Kim! 😘
DeleteWell, dear Sanaa ... this is an epic lyric composition. Gotta say, you were my inspiration for this challenge!!! Cheers.
ReplyDeleteYou are amazing! Cheers! 😍
DeleteI love poetry I can dance to!
ReplyDeleteThank you, Nolcha! ❤️
DeleteSo clever Sanaa! You worked hard on this and made it so much fun ☺️❤️
ReplyDeleteThanks, Christine 😘
DeleteGreat poem Sanaa.
ReplyDeleteThank you, Maria 😊
DeleteThat was brilliant, Sanaa! I was singing right along!
ReplyDeleteYvette M Calleiro :-)
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I am glad you enjoyed it ❤️
DeleteI like how you did this (Bega would smile his big smile) the rhythm swings along, and your words tailored and the verses would stand alone, the chorus' a hoot, much going on and thoroughly enjoyable.
ReplyDeleteThank you, Paul! 😊
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