Thursday, 22 October 2026

Black Olive Appetency

 


















I cannot love you gently.

There is midnight in my blood, thunder

in my veins,

intimacies that resemble sunlight

and a sky that weeps in rain.


Tell me what you ache for, as sweet

surrender

of a flame to the waiting wick,

I am fluent in ardor,


I don't believe in keeping intensity in check.

Outside the city is restless, it's

forged in pink profanities and promises

that half deliver—

in the geography of your body,

my longing becomes a river. 


I am not interested in desire that is afraid. 


Before me, black olives gleam like

appetency—

dark, salt-bitten and ripened into want;

a hunger sharp enough to savor,

earthy enough to make the mouth ask twice. 


Meet me halfway, and I will tell you why

olives taste sweeter after salt.


I wear love like moonlight in arteries, 

offer peace

that heart sustains—

I was raised on simple soft flatbread,

I will lose myself

in you and not complain. 


Such a little thing—

skin against skin,

the faint collision of two living silences,

allow me to kiss parts of you

that sorrow stains,


I cannot love you gently—

even the stars

would envy what our darkness contains.


Your tousled hair and stormy eyes,

alluring to the point

that even shadows grow curious,

is a feeling I cannot name—


I am both brazen and reticent,

I would choose your twilight

over a thousand mountain prairies. 


Is it insane to want you 

so much

that restraint begins to feel like a lie?

How many nights 

must I dream of your lips

before I dare to make them mine?


I cannot love you gently—


there is midnight in my blood, thunder 

in my veins, 

intimacies that resemble sunlight 

and a sky that weeps in rain.

 



Photo credits: Pinterest

Posted for dVerse Poets Pub - OLN #418 (and dVerse Live) on Saturday. Thank you for your kind comments and visits.

25 comments:

  1. So much here, Sanaa....the queen of romance. This stanza
    "Outside the city is restless, it's
    forged in pink profanities and promises
    that half deliver—
    in the geography of your body"
    has so much feeling and description in it. The juxtapositioning of the restless city and the geography of the body.
    The inclusion of food, and raw imagery.
    These words
    "allow me to kiss parts of you
    that sorrow stains," are so personal, so empathetic, so personal.

    Another amazing poem, Sanaa.

    my longing becomes a river. "

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    1. Thank you so much, Lillian πŸ₯° so glad you enjoyed it! I will read this on Saturday ❤️❤️

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  2. Oh I love the way you draw on the passionate darkness throughout the poem... the repeated lines make it all the stronger.

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    1. Thank you so much, Bjorn 😊 so glad the poem resonated with you! ❤️❤️

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  3. Very Nice Sanaa, I always enjoy your no holds barred, and honest approach! πŸ™ Much Love! πŸ’š

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    1. Thank you so much, Cara πŸ₯° so glad you enjoyed it ❤️❤️

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  4. "Meet me halfway, and I will tell you why olives taste sweeter after salt" ... really enjoyed the flamboyant declarations, such a fun read of an obstinate innocent insistence of romance and love.

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    1. Thank you so much, Ain 😊 so glad the poem and its imagery resonated with you ❤️❤️

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  5. A stunning and sensual write as always, Sanaa. I love how the ending echoes the beginning, and I love the line:

    "I am not interested ind desire that is afraid." Brilliant 🩷

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    1. Thank you so much, Sunra πŸ₯° so glad you liked it ❤️❤️

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  6. Meet me halfway, and I will tell you why

    olives taste sweeter after salt....

    Uh-oh...

    And I cannot love anything or anyone gently either. I don't think I have ever read a poem that reads as how I feel in love.

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    1. Thank you so much, Reelika ☺️ so glad you enjoyed it ❤️❤️

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  7. Stunning and stirring, Sanaa, wow! The bookend refrains are perfect, too. Fabulous poem! πŸ–€

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    1. Thank you so much, Jennifer 😘 so glad the poem and its imagery resonated with you ❤️❤️

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  8. I knew I should have tested my blood pressure before reading your poem, Sanaa - hope to hear you read it tomorrow...

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    1. HA HA. Sanaa's poem may inspire a lovely dream or three tonight.

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    2. Hahahaha 🀭 oh my! Thank you! ❤️❤️

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  9. WELL OK then .. Helen has had her dose of sensuous, deeply moving, beautifully composed poetry for the month of October!!! However will you top this during November? Knowing your talent for delivering poems that resonate so incredibly deeply .. think you will figure that out. A pleasure watching as you read this, Sanaa.

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    1. I will do my best! πŸ˜‰ Thank you so much, Helen 😘 so glad you enjoyed it ❤️❤️

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  10. I really loved hearing your read your beautiful poem, Sanaa. The midnight in your blood and thunder in your veins is a really great image!

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    1. Thank you so much, Dwight πŸ₯° so glad the poem and its imagery resonated with you ❤️❤️

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  11. 'pink profanities and promises' - love this line Sanaa πŸ‘

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    1. Thank you so much, Shaun ☺️ so glad you liked it ❤️❤️

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